Thursday, March 11, 2010

Jeydon Is Faking!

Justin Bieber wasn't really into singing when he was younger. He was more into hockey and soccer. Justin never thought he would become music's biggest star in 2009. It's a unbelievable story how Justin got discovered. Well, Justin's mother put videos up on YouTube of Justin singing and playing the drums. Justin got so many hits on his videos. Justin's manager Scooter told Usher about Justin and Usher saw Justin's videos on YouTube and Usher flew Justin and his mom out to Atlanta Georgia to sign a recording contract. Now it's 2010 and Justin is one of the biggest stars on TV. Their is also another guy on YouTube and his name is Jeydon Wale. Jeydon isn't famous in the public eye yet. He is a YouTube sensation. Jeydon makes videos of him acting stupid, rapping, acting like other celebrities. He wants to become an actor. He has so many hits on YouTube, Just like Justin Bieber. And Strangely enough, Jeydon looks like Justin. The only difference is, Jeydon is 18 years old and Justin is 15 years old.

Justin went home to his hometown, Stratford Ontario to see his friends and family. Justin knew about Jeydon and how they looked alike. Justin was walking around with his friends and all of a sudden, fans came running up to him. They were asking him for his autograph. That was all fine until Jeydon showed up out of nowhere. Jeydon walked up to the fans and told them that, that wasn't the real Justin and told them he was the real one. Fans believed him because he looked like Justin. Justin got so mad but he didn't show it, he just walked away. But than Jeydon did the same thing again but at Justin's concert. Justin's manager thought Jeydon was Justin and Jeydon went along with it and he got to perform 1 song but it wasn't a Justin song, it was one of Jeydon's original songs. Jeydon raps so now all Justin's fans think he is a rapper now. After the 1 song was over, Justin showed up and went on the stage where Jeydon was and proved to the fans that Jeydon was a fake. Justin performed "Baby" and everybody believed Justin. But their was no arguing about Justin and Jeydon looking alike. Justin went back home and their was something wrong because it had an awful smell to his house. It smelled like dog poop. Justin knew who did this, it was Jeydon Wale. Jeydon wanted to get back at Justin because of what Justin did to him on stage in front of thousands of fans. So Justin took charge and called the cops and told the cops about Jeydon and what he has been doing. The cops finally stopped the fighting between Justin and Jeydon. But the minute the cops left Justin's house, Jeydon and Justin made an understanding. More like an agreement. When Justin gets sick, Jeydon can take his place but Jeydon has to perform Justin's songs instead of his own. Jeydon agreed to everything.

What Jeydon did at the begging was wrong. Nobody should fake as being somebody else. Justin knew that from the beginning. Justin did the right thing to do, he did the 3 steps on how to get a poser off his back. Jeydon will still be faking as Justin but that's only when Justin gets sick or something. Now that all the fighting between Justin and Jeydon is done, they are friends. Not best friends yet, but they are friends.

1 comment:

  1. Ok, I see where you've added some things. We'll work on dividing your writing into more manageable chunks.

    Don't forget what an important part of stories dialogue is. You should try to balance narration with quotations of what the characters said.

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